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PostSubject: The game's script so far...   Wed May 18, 2011 11:15 pm

Actually, I didn't take to account the player's gender and assumed it'd be female. OTL I was wondering if we should make minor adjustments addressing that. >>;

Anyway, here's what I have so far. The line breaks mean you click to continue the dialogue.

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Following the dusty old train tracks, you find yourself facing the beginning of a forest.
Trees are randomly scattered around, gradually becoming thicker as you venture deeper down the tracks ahead of you.
Presently you see the back of a large train with a familiar logo painted at the last car.
You pause to examine the demonic visage that appears to smirk down at you.
Beyond the train, you spot an enormous tent with obnoxious red and white stripes. It must be the big top.
You can see much smaller multi-colored tents positioned in a grid-like fashion behind it.
People - most likely the cast and crew - are scurrying in and out of the big top and among the tents in a hurry.
You can hear them shouting at each other, occasionally catching obscenities being exchanged.
The entrance to the big top suddenly flutters open, and a man with green hair stomps out, shouting behind him.

???: Would you all hurry it up?! The show starts in four hours and I don't see any of you even close to ready!

You adjust your bag and approach the green-haired man. You tap his shoulder and he turns to face you.
???: Huh? Who are you?
-Enter your name here-
???: "[Name]?" Do I know you...?
-smiles- Ah, you're here for the show.
-annoyed smile- Well, you're way too early. Please escort yourself out.
Unless...you've come here for a job?


You get a choice for your answer here.
That's right.
No way.

If you answer "That's right":
???: Ah, well then, please excuse my rudeness. I didn't realize that you were so interested in joining our circus.
However, we've got our hands full at the moment, so if you don't mind, can you please wait until after the show to talk?
What's that?


If you answered "No way":
???: Then what the hell are you doing here?
???: If you have no business around here--
???: What was that?


Both paths meet here.
???: You're...a reporter?
-surprised- Oh! You're the one who called this morning from the local newspaper, aren't you?
The one who wanted to feature our circus in an article?


If you answered "No way" earlier, this will show. If not, then you won't see it.
???: -smiling- Well, I had no idea you were so important!
Please excuse my rudeness from earlier.


???: Well then, allow me to introduce myself formally.
I am Pierrot IV, the ringmaster and owner of the Demoniac Circus.

His name will now appear as "Pierrot" from this point on.
???: I really didn't expect you to do an interview before the show, [Name].
You must really want to see how we work, huh?
Well, I can't blame you! Hahaha!
Don't worry, [Name], I really don't mind.
Can't say the same for some members though~
Let's see...
It's quite busy right now around here, but...what the hell.
-smiling- I suppose there's no harm in giving you a little backstage tour.
I'm sure this is what you wanted to see anyways.
Shall we go now?
Oh, and one more thing...
You should stick close to me. I'd hate it if you were eaten by one of our cute little pets.


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I'll update this when I get Perry's sprites done and put where they'll be shown. =u=
Just volunteer if you want your character to be the next stop, and we can work together on the next part of the script. C:
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Sat May 21, 2011 2:18 am

At this point, the player will be given choices of places to go. Perry is the tour guide, lol.

Here are the places with the characters in each location. Just comment where you want your character to be located at, and I'll add them to this post. C: Feel free to add more locations.

Big Top
-Jake
-Nelly
-Grin

Animals
-Lee

Acrobats
-Karolin
-Tobi
-Warrilow

Freakshows/Midway
-Janis
-Lorelei
-Peple
-Sayuri

Kitchen/Cookhouse
-Ali

Bath house
-Bianca

Storage Car
-Ty
-Joel


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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon May 23, 2011 3:43 pm

Lazy Kitsune wrote:
At this point, the player will be given choices of places to go. Perry is the tour guide, lol.

Here are the places with the characters in each location. Just comment where you want your character to be located at, and I'll add them to this post. C: Feel free to add more locations.

Big Top

Animals

Acrobats

Freakshows
-Janis
-Lorelei

Kitchen

Bath house
Bianca is at the bathhouse and Jakey is going to be at the big top
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon May 23, 2011 9:30 pm

Okie dokie~
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon May 23, 2011 11:13 pm

Lazy Kitsune wrote:
At this point, the player will be given choices of places to go. Perry is the tour guide, lol.

Here are the places with the characters in each location. Just comment where you want your character to be located at, and I'll add them to this post. C: Feel free to add more locations.

Big Top
-Jake

Animals

Acrobats

Freakshows
-Janis
-Lorelei

Kitchen

Bath house
-Bianca

Tobi and Karolin are with the acrobats! :3
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon May 23, 2011 11:40 pm

Nelly can has also be in the big top?
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Tue May 24, 2011 6:44 am

FireGlaceon wrote:
Tobi and Karolin are with the acrobats! :3

Skittles wrote:
Nelly can has also be in the big top?

I got you guys covered~ <3
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Wed May 25, 2011 10:12 am

HMm.. it's getting kind of crowded in the big top, but I made Ty carry some stuff so idk if he can be there aswell?
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Wed May 25, 2011 9:23 pm

Hutt wrote:
HMm.. it's getting kind of crowded in the big top, but I made Ty carry some stuff so idk if he can be there aswell?
How about the storage car in the train? I can add that. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Sat May 28, 2011 6:42 am

Lazy Kitsune wrote:
Hutt wrote:
HMm.. it's getting kind of crowded in the big top, but I made Ty carry some stuff so idk if he can be there aswell?
How about the storage car in the train? I can add that. Very Happy

Oh, yes, please! Very Happy Awesome, thanks...

The player could be snooping around! Twisted Evil (<-lol dat smiley)
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Sat May 28, 2011 7:21 am

Hutt wrote:
Lazy Kitsune wrote:
Hutt wrote:
HMm.. it's getting kind of crowded in the big top, but I made Ty carry some stuff so idk if he can be there aswell?
How about the storage car in the train? I can add that. Very Happy

Oh, yes, please! Very Happy Awesome, thanks...

The player could be snooping around! Twisted Evil (<-lol dat smiley)

Done and done. eue
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Sun May 29, 2011 5:52 pm

Can Tyke be running around between cars (so he's in a car hallway as opposed to actually somewhere doing something).
I doubt they'd actually make it back to Perry's car...

Also, if Perry is walking with the journalist, can I write a bit of Perry or work with you Kitsune,
to have a bit of dialog between Tyke and Perry? (cause Tyke so wouldn't ignore Perry
if he ran into him), but that's only if the player and Perry run into him while on the 'tour'
and not after they separate.

And I thinking....
Ali in the kitchen... cause I'm thinking about giving him some booze. XD
But I'm still thinking about him...
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Sun May 29, 2011 10:04 pm

LollipopBoy wrote:
Can Tyke be running around between cars (so he's in a car hallway as opposed to actually somewhere doing something).
I doubt they'd actually make it back to Perry's car...

Also, if Perry is walking with the journalist, can I write a bit of Perry or work with you Kitsune,
to have a bit of dialog between Tyke and Perry? (cause Tyke so wouldn't ignore Perry
if he ran into him), but that's only if the player and Perry run into him while on the 'tour'
and not after they separate.
Ah, the coding might be a bit more difficult for that. ^^; The way it is is that there will be a menu of the locations that the player can choose from, and the game jumps directly to the choice. Um...it looks like this:


So when you choose, say "Big Top," the game jumps directly to the Big Top scene. We can try to get Tyke to appear randomly after visiting a location. Like after the Big Top, he follows Perry until Perry chases him off or something, and from that point on, he can randomly appear after visiting locations. I found a code that can make things happen randomly after certain conditions are met, so just tell me what you think. Maybe if Tyke was in a certain place first, then every time you visit another location after meeting him, he randomly appears?

LollipopBoy wrote:
And I thinking....
Ali in the kitchen... cause I'm thinking about giving him some booze. XD
But I'm still thinking about him...
Okay, just let me know! xD
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Sun May 29, 2011 10:19 pm

....For Tyke to randomly pop up... That's brilliant. You're brilliant Kitsune. Q A Q
((just know that fer sure, one of Tyke's sprites is wearing some
Perriot clothing ;D ))

And it's for certain. Started on Ali's script and he's in the kitchen. : )
Thank ya.
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon May 30, 2011 12:06 am

LollipopBoy wrote:
....For Tyke to randomly pop up... That's brilliant. You're brilliant Kitsune. Q A Q
((just know that fer sure, one of Tyke's sprites is wearing some
Perriot clothing ;D ))

And it's for certain. Started on Ali's script and he's in the kitchen. : )
Thank ya.

Aha, awesome! xD Just let me know where you want to first meet Tyke. I'll add Ali to the kitchen now. C:
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon Jun 06, 2011 4:21 am

Mannn everything seems so awesome so far 8DD This is gonna rock man.

uhhh idk I guess Wally would be up with the acrobats and Peple would be with the freakshows?? yeahhh Cool

ALSO I THINK THAT TYKE APPEARING RANDOMLY WOULD BE SO ADORABLE OH MY GOD <3
//sneaks off to work on sprites uhm...
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:40 am

Pyromei wrote:
Mannn everything seems so awesome so far 8DD This is gonna rock man.

uhhh idk I guess Wally would be up with the acrobats and Peple would be with the freakshows?? yeahhh Cool

ALSO I THINK THAT TYKE APPEARING RANDOMLY WOULD BE SO ADORABLE OH MY GOD <3
//sneaks off to work on sprites uhm...
Alright, I added them. C:
Oh, here's where the draft of Karolin and Tobi's script is: http://demoniaccircus.forumotion.com/t43-karolin-tobi-s-script-draft
How do you want Wally to be written in?
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:55 pm

Cool 8DD
Oh oh okay I just read through it Cool
I guess uhhh, after they meet Karolin and Tobi and stuff, and Pierrot tells the reporter person that they should move on, they could like, uh, idk, stumble across Warrilow practicing or stretching or something I guess?? Yeah I'm an uncreative little kid 8(
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Tue Jun 07, 2011 1:29 am

Nah, that's cool. Can you do a script of the text and I'll just edit it for you? C:
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Tue Jun 07, 2011 6:04 am

Alright Cool I'll go make one and put it up soon, i guess xDD
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:24 pm

Bwuhhhhhhhh Jonahhhhhhh. : A:
I have no idea how to write a script or anything like that. ;;;;;;;
and I just realized that Nelly doesn't have any expressive emotional changes because she wears a mask. Omfg what do I doooooo? ::: A::::
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:32 pm

Ahhh...oh man I wouldn't know where Grin would be the most... but I was thinking instead of just calling the area the 'freakshow' why not a 'midway' because it seems like our little circus lacks one,plus the freakshow would be apart of the midway along with other side attractions and such :3
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Tue Jun 21, 2011 7:45 am

Lazy Kitsune wrote:
At this point, the player will be given choices of places to go. Perry is the tour guide, lol.

Here are the places with the characters in each location. Just comment where you want your character to be located at, and I'll add them to this post. C: Feel free to add more locations.

Big Top
-Jake
-Nelly

Animals

Acrobats
-Karolin
-Tobi
-Warrilow

Freakshows
-Janis
-Lorelei
-Peple

Kitchen/Cookhouse (I just learned the proper term is "Cookhouse" orz)
-Ali

Bath house
-Bianca

Storage Car
-Ty


LEE IS WITH THE ANIMALS ;u; sorry if im late !!
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:50 am

Lazy Kitsune wrote:
At this point, the player will be given choices of places to go. Perry is the tour guide, lol.

Here are the places with the characters in each location. Just comment where you want your character to be located at, and I'll add them to this post. C: Feel free to add more locations.

Big Top
-Jake
-Nelly

Animals

Acrobats
-Karolin
-Tobi
-Warrilow

Freakshows
-Janis
-Lorelei
-Peple

Kitchen/Cookhouse (I just learned the proper term is "Cookhouse" orz)
-Ali

Bath house
-Bianca

Storage Car
-Ty

Grin would dwell in the BIG TOP :3 [hooray]
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PostSubject: Re: The game's script so far...   Tue Jun 21, 2011 9:50 am

mytwitchyfoxnose wrote:
Ahhh...oh man I wouldn't know where Grin would be the most... but I was thinking instead of just calling the area the 'freakshow' why not a 'midway' because it seems like our little circus lacks one,plus the freakshow would be apart of the midway along with other side attractions and such :3

Sorry for the late reply guys. ;u;

That's a good idea, and I'll add Grin and Lee to the list. C:
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